thriller feedback, Take two!

• How effectively edited is the thriller?

All the footage is nice and cleanly cut.
Good variety of shots
Every shot finishes in time with the music.
variation in the amount of shots- mysterious.
Panning shots upwards- vertical pan- from cards to characters.
Some shots are a little bit too long, but overall, very good.

• Discuss the use of sound in the thriller both diegetic and non-diegetic. What emotions does it invoke and how effective is it?

Dietetic sounds make it realistic and adds to the narrative, helps explain the story.
Music good, a little to happy for genre but could add to a twist in the film? adds suspense.

• What words would you use to describe the visual style?

Props were really good and costumes were excellent. We liked the way the nervous guy looked; the way he loosened his ti, it was very effective and acted well. The location of the film was very good.
Artistic, realistic and very good.

• Highlight at ;east three things that you think are good about this thriller and two areas for development or suggestions of how things could have been done differently.
  

Really like how you create a story. you have put in a lot of effort with your costumes and props which help you create the thriller genre you are trying to achieve.

Only main suggestion for improvement would be about the body bag- doesn't look like body otherwise really good.